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Skill Development

During the three-month (450 hours) internship period at the XXXXXX, I could develop myself (1) to follow skill development for any job in the competitive job market.

Simultaneous work-and-study skills:

The internship program (2) made me explore my potential and ability to work and study (3) in parallel. I previously believed that I could not take work and study side by side. However, my internship program helped me develop and enhance these skills.

Communication skill

(4) the internship program will help to improve my communication skills up to a professional level, in both writing and speaking. During this period, I observed and learnt from other co-workers (5) how to communicate with customers (6) in an attractive way. In addition, during conflicts, I learnt (7) how to manage and communicate in a calm respectful and also polite manner. I developed (8) more professional writing skills such as (9) official letter writing, memo, request letter, audit report writing etc.

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